D#6 HW#3 Essay Thoughts

What I liked about the distance learning essay was that it was short and sweet. It didn’t offer much in examples of why distance learning might replace traditional instruction which I would’ve liked to read about. It did, however, state the reason why one might choose distance learning. This essay wasn’t the required 4-7 pages long, didn’t offer different positions on this issue by potential audience members/parties. The sources stated at the end of the essay didn’t offer the reasons why they are relevant, what the purpose is, and how they relate to the audience. I also didn’t understand the controversy surrounding this issue or how the author is invested in this topic. So, although it seems like a good start I believe that this essay needs more information to fit into the WP#2 assignment prompt.