http://summer-english102blog.blogspot.com/2009/09/d4-hw9-wp1-draft.html
http://corey2458.blogspot.com/2009/09/d4-hw-9-2.html
This was a fun assignment! I like reading other papers because it give me much insight as to what I’m doing right or wrong whether I really know it or not. I learned from peer reviewing these papers that I need to expand more on my paragraphs and/or my points. I also feel that I could use more complicated words. Being a mom makes me lost my big girl vocabulary! So I need to use the thesaurus more to improve on my wording. I wish I could have comments on my paper but the link on the main page for my blog doesn’t work! I don’t know what do to from here …..
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