D#5 HW#3 Paragraph Analysis

I started with the fact that tribes must make a compact agreement with their respective states to build and run a casino. This is where the process starts. I then presented in the next paragraph the opposing sides of the casinos once the compacts are approved by the tribes and states. This paragraph is where most of the controversy lies. In the next paragraph I stated the reasons why I’m invested in this topic and I transitioned my further interest in this topic in the next paragraph. I believe my paragraphs all relate to one another but I do feel that I could definitely use better transitions from paragraph to paragraph and I know my paper could always use some improvement. In my final paragraph I stated my research options and my timeline and also the reason(s) why my audience as well as my potential audience would be interested in my research.