D#3, HW#3 - Essay

I like that she has had experience with both breastfeeding and bottle feeding. I do feel that she could've elaborated on the pros and cons of each choice due to the fact that she has the experience of doing both. She also could've stated the "valid" reasons why mothers make the choice they do. Sometimes women don't always make their decision based on the needs of their baby; they make decisions based on their own needs. With her expanding on it would give her paragraphs a basic outline and more options to research. Other than that I thought it was interesting. I would also have liked to read what her husband thought about this topic. This aspect would give her male audience reason to be interested in her final paper because maybe they just had a baby or are expecting and trying to decide with their wife/girlfriend which choice would be better for them. Good topic though!